Three: Magazine Focus
Focus is simply
the way the magazine looks at the world. Some say they are the magazine of the newest and the latest. Others boast that they
are the magazine for the jugglers: women who expect to have it all. Deciding what each magazines focus is helps us tailor
our article just for that magazine.
A
look at the magazine field:
Most of us are familiar with the magazines we see on
the stands. But there are thousands on the market today, most of them take some
freelance material. Major categories are:
Consumer publications, company publications and trade, technical and professional journals.
1. Consumer publications. Most of the magazines we’re
familiar with are in this category. Women’s, men’s, sports, juveniles,
religious, specialty fields such as travel, RV and retirement magazines.
2. Company publications. These are put out by companies
for customers or employees. Ford Truck Times, in-flight magazines and others.
3. Trade, Technical and Professional journals. This is
by far the largest group of publications. They are geared for a certain profession
or type of work. Examples are Nursery Retailer,
Each of these groups is narrowed down to different
categories, which are narrowed down even more to a particular readership. Each
magazine has its own theme responding to its particular readership. An editor’s
aim is to give his/her reader what he is looking for: a reader of a travel magazine
wants to know places to go, a woman buying a House and Garden magazine wants ideas to beautify her home.
Here is the way some magazines look at the world:
Cosmopolitan—How to get your man
Good Housekeeping—The magazine America lives by
Bon Appetit--Says they are America's Food and Entertainment Magazine
Costal Living--The Magazine for People Who Love The Coast
Conde Nast Traveler-- The Truth About Upscale Travel
All Over the World
How to analyze a magazine
To learn to know the magazine and the readership you
want to write for you must study the magazine inside-out. Here’s how:
1. Look at the cover. In many cases the cover will let you know who the magazine thinks the reader is.
2. Read the ads. In Backpacker magazine. I see ads for an automobile rugged enough to cross a mountain stream without
a road, trail food, motivational lecture for hitting the trail, hiking boots, sleeping bags….
3. Read the editorial.
4. Go over the columns.
5. Read the letters to the editors.
6. Finally, look at the articles (mainly the pictures, titles and subs)
These will tell you who the reader is—what the
reader’s interest is, and how the editor is trying to approach that reader.
You have found the theme of the magazine, now how does
the magazine want the article put together?
Mechanical Slant
For this exercise we will use two magazines. AARP,
The Magazine, the retirement magazine, and Costal Living. The Magazine for People Who Love the Coast.
1. How many articles in each issue? Average each issue of Coastal
Living, 7 articles about homes, 6 travel articles, 4 about costal lifestyles. AARP, The Magazine, about
7 feature stories each issue.
2. Do they use any fiction? Coastal Living doesn't use any fiction, ever. I haven't seen any
in AARP, The Magazine.
3. Do they want first, second or third person? Does it vary? Coastal
Living can use all three. AARP, The Magazine uses all three but each voice must be appropriate for the article.
Celebrity articles, for instance use 1st person.
4. Do they use quotes from authorities? Costal Living uses quotes from authorities this way:
"Weather vanes have become so valuable that you treat them as sculpture" says antiques dealer Nina Hellman. "How you display
them inside depends on the architecture of the home." Here is an example
from AARP, The Magazine. "Guardianship is a godsend and a gulag," says Erica Wood, associate staf director of the American
Bar Association's Commission on Law and aging. "It's a lifesaver and a life stopper. It's and a fife stopper. It/s an
institution that we as a society need. But we need to make it better."
5. What about statistics? Both Magazines use statistics. Here's an example from AARP, The Magazine. In an
eight-week study, nursing home residents, ages 86 to 96 increased their muscle strength by 174 percent and increased their-walking
speed by 48 percent. Costal Living:The Conservancy's deep involvement
with the Vriginia seaside began some 30 years ago with purchases of 14 barrier islands stretching more thant 60 miles--19,,500
acres of undeveloped Atlantic Beach.
6. Do they use lots of anecdotes (examples in action)? Coastal
Living: Wearing a sundress the color of lemon dorps, Lynn Ham Young waks barefoot onto the beach at Kauai's North Shore.
With arms frull of dried halia leaves, she leads her three weaving partners to a cool custion of sand. Here, a sunshade of
palm fronds intercepts the bring light of the afternoon. Each woman grabs a corner of a monarch-orange sarong and places it
on the velvety sand where, for the next few hours, they'll sit with limber leaves and humble tools, weaving masterpieces with
their calloused hands.
ARRPA The Magazine; On a crisp
June morning in the Sierra Nevada mountain range of California, Genevieve Summers tips her head back and squints up at the
250-foot giant sequoia towering above her. She adjusts her harness, grips the rope and begins ascending the massive column
of wood , savoring the freeze and sweeping parnarama opening up below. "I've found my passion, says Summers, who used to run
a chimney-sweep business. "When I'm in the trees, I'm home."
7. How is the article organized?
8. What kind of leads?
A lead is a device to hook a reader into a manuscript
by starting with a general statement that unveils the problem and finishes with a sentence that makes the reader have to read
on.
"Thousands of older Americans are being robbed
of their freedom, dignity, and life savings by a legal system created for their protection. * How can this happen?"
(Now you have to read on to find out how this can happen). That's called hooking your reader.
Rember when you were 15 and thought summer would
last forever? When warm days stretched lazily into nighttime and responsibilities amounted to no more than showing up on time
fro dinner? Remember your first true summer love, and wishing it would never end?
Such are the poignant memories evoked by the classic coming-of-age movie Summer of '42--the 1971 film that inspired
interior designer Tobby West to re-create that nostalgic feeling in this Seaside, Florida home. Now you have to read on to find out how he created a nostalgic feeling.
" You're in good company if you struggle
with writer's block; it strikes writers of all disciplines, experience, and skill levels. Even the very best. Many--actually,
most top writers still face the ominous glow of the blank screen from time to time. *But they've learned how to sharpen the
tools necessary to break through and finish what they start (Again you have to read on to find out how they break through.
9. The vocabulary. The vocabulary varies from formal to informal. I look
at the magazine and give the vocabulary a rating of from one to three. Decide what the magazine you want to write for uses.
Then that's what you use. Let's try an example: (1) The John Muir Trail has blistered more than a few happy feet. "Once you
get hooked on the sweeping grantic domes, gin-clear streams, and putting-green meadows, you're not going to stop to treat
a measly hot spot." (this is informal) 2. "The Museum of Fine Arts has a brand-new restaurant called Bravo that features dishes
made with locally grown ingredients."
10. The
overall approach. Does the magazine tell the story with an interview approach.
Do they tell you how to do something?
11. What
type of pictures and captions? Does the magazine use pictures of people up close in action? Do they use static scenery?
Static pictures without people? What? Try to give the magazine the type of pictures they use. Generally you will find two
types. One sentence: Michele savors the moment Neighbor and chef Betsy McNair
at the grill. Two sentence. John Markus looking out over the Markoff Valley.
He is determined to make this area a wilderness area.
12. Length
of articles? Lengths for some magazines runs from 1,000 to 1500 words, others to 2500. Many major magazines also run 3000
plus. Look at the magazine and give them what they are running.
13. How
many concern people or are they more about places and things?
Some travel magazines concentrate on places,
not people. Others have a combination of both.
14. If the
mechanics differ in the various articles, make a checklist of how many are used for each style. You will need to do this
by studying the magazine.
Assignment:
In the last exercise you looked for ideas. Now let’s find a market for those ideas. Often the same
idea can be used for different markets by changing the slant. As an example,
here is a short news item that appeared in a newspaper. Let’s see where
we could use this by changing the slant.
Water Roundup Puts Bands on Nearly 3,000 Wild Geese
3,000 Great Basin Canada geese are wearing new bands that will help biologists of California Department of Fish and
Game keep tabs on their status. Banded by Nevada Fish and Game Department and
U.S. Bureau of Sport fisheries and Wildlife, airboats and motorboats were used on five lakes and reservoirs for roundup. Geese were herded into traps with operations directed by radio.
Men’s magazine—What to do if the goose you’re hunting is banded.
Juvenile—How we count wild geese.
Trade—Use of radio herds geese.
Boating—Western roundup on the water.
1. Analyze three different magazines. What is the overall theme of the magazine? What is the breakdown for the different mechanical slant of the articles? How many use first person, how many use anecdotal leads, etc.
2. Slant your idea to the different magazines.